My god that is truly incredible! You have such talent and are at that, very inspirational.

Omgosh its sooo sad!! but once again well written your soo good!! and sooo soo sad i almost cried!!

So sad, but so well written. Great poem!

This is so amazingly written! I feel like crying! I think this poem is a perfect metaphor of what life can sometimes be. Keep up the good work! :)

Wow!! this is really an amazing poem...very powerful indeed. u simply wrote it beautifully, loved each part of it. very touchy

take care and all the best

OMG!! tiny u just broke my heart. *cries* ARGH! it's ok.. I still love u *grins* tiny... that was just... beyond words... i'm actually speechless... i'm never speechless... *sighs* I wish that I could have a tiny bit of your ability... man... that was awesome... ok.. i'm gonna go bury myself in a hole now... *hugs* c u l8er honey!

Great one there! it was beautiful - the rhyming perfect, the story extremely powerful!
great work!

Great poem i loved it so much wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This Is Such A Wonderful Poem! Very Sad Though! Well Written...So Well Written It Made Me Cry!

Same as ruthie...i think you just broke my heart. it kind of gives you hope, then snatches it away. words are powerful things, and you sure know how to use them to your advantage. great write, i can't wait for the next one...

abbi xxx

A Powerful write but so well done...great job...

Love Ann

=( another sad one! yet, well written!! the emotion was conveyed very well!!

Take Care
CK♥

So powerful and well written! Another good poem from you!

Over and over again you continue to impress me with your talent. Your poems are so well thought out and so well written. This poem was so sad but I loved every word of it! Please keep it up, this definetly deserves a 5/5... Once again wonderful job...

sammie

Over and over again you continue to impress me with your talent. Your poems are so well thought out and so well written. This poem was so sad but I loved every word of it! Please keep it up, this definetly deserves a 5/5... Once again wonderful job...

sammie

Wow, wot an amazing and beautifully written poem, I luvd it!!!
Beth xxx

That was sweet!! it made me wanna cry! your an awesome writer!
Audrey

I'm about to cry. This is so, so sad! That's terrible. Not the poem. The poem is as perfect as all your others. It's beautifully bittersweet.

This is stunning!Such a sweet powerful love story then the twist of tragedy at the end.This is wrote so wonderfully-it flows great, the rhyme scheme blends in so smoothly allowing one to get caught up in the emotion of the feelings and words you've wrought so perfectly.I really can't say anymore than what everyone else has already said, but this is just so heartbreakingly beautiful and touching.

OMG how sad, to finally find a love and then loose her like that. A very heart breaking write, but beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela