Virus of Love

by X2892   Mar 11, 2006


Makes you lose sight of realtiy
then makes you abnormality.
But in the end a fatality
happens to your heart.
Once you fall in love
that will be your biggest mistake of
your life.
Cause from then you'll
be in a world full of pain that is a pure evil virus.
Only hapens to people who
have bad luck, so screw
all of you with good luck!!!

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, u r too good, honestly u are so great ...........5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Oh wow. i like this one a lot. its really good. you have a very good message in here. keep writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Only hapens to people who
    ((Happen))

    Now, I liked the beginning on this poem, but the ending, to me, was poor. I'm sorry this is harsh, but I really didn't like the poem. There was no flow and the format seemed broken-- I was pausing in places it felt odd to pause at. Sorry.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow VIRUS OF LOVE titled sounds very interesting to read very nice poem well, good luck i know u have the talent 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    That was good. loved the ending!! 5/5
    ~*Katherine*~

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