I still love you

by The Poetic Child   Mar 17, 2006


You Said you needed space
So I'm left here with no clue,
Now I'm left with this broken face
To even know i still love you...

I'm sorry i was distant
and I'm sorry we got dull
But this love, you will miss it
once this bullet hits my skull

I'm Sorry... for being a pain
Pain is something i deserve
But now i go nobody in this rain
I'm Sorry..i got on your nerve

But I'm willing to love you forever
And i know he cant love like i can..
The Memories of...When we were together,
The Memories Of when i was your man

To see you with someone new
Is like watching my own death
The fact that i still love you
The thought takes my breath

I pull this gun to my head
You Can here this sound of my voice,
Either I'm here with you, or I'm dead on this bed,
This is all your choice

You Said you needed space
So I'm left here with no clue,
Now I'm left with this broken face
To even know i still love you...

He cant love you..like i am willing
To give you his heart and soul
When your here i just get this feeling,
and makes my heart lose control

ill stand by your side thick and thin
I want you, to really see
That i want your love to re-begin
And Still love me

If not I'm laid out on this bed
For i have nothing to live for,
I Hate You...is all you said
And thats why I'm dieing on this floor

I'm trying to stand back on my feet
But you gave me the power
Without you here, I'm just weak
I need you back in this hour

I cant stand be alone
I just don't know what to do
I miss hearing your voice on the phone,
And just hearing you say..i love you

I need you hear..
Your what i need
Ive made my point clear
with out you i will bleed

Whether its through my heart
Or through my skull
I just that the fact were apart
Cause we grew Dull

here is your chance,
Please Choose the right one
I want to have another dance
Right under this magical sun..

You Said you needed space
So I'm left here with no clue,
Now I'm left with this broken face
To even know i still love you...

*Dedication- to the one i still love
~Lollipop~Sweetie~

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  • 11 years ago

    by Candice

    This poem was very deep and I have gone through some of the same things in my life. That touched me very deep.

  • 11 years ago

    by simply taylor

    Wow...you went pretty deep on that one didn't ya david... i really liked this one. i could totally relate to this one. i really can. i still have that feeling though too...and it won't go away. remember that taylor dude i was telling you about...yup...all becuz of him. anywho...great poem. i really liked it. 5/5
    ...+...kortney...+...

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    OMG IM BACK YAY, i missed this site lol, especially your wonderful poetry aww, this poem in particular just the first verse of it is amazing awww, wonderful hun, takecare,xxoo

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I think i read this b4 but i cant find ur other account maybe u can comment to me using that account and then i can check it out..but rly good poem vrry touching...keep it up.

    Lissa

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is long, but i only realized this after completing it..so it was worth it.

    very nicely penned
    great poem indeed

    all the best and take care
    5/5