S.O.S

by X2892   Apr 3, 2006


Help,help,help me!!
I'm stuck in the shadows.
Everyone passes by me
no one See's me in the shadows.

I'm falling deeper inside the darkness
seeing less
of my reflection.
The light gives me a direction
to follow.
But.. why does the darkness swallow
me into it?

Help,help,help me!!
I'm stuck in the shadows.
Everyone passes by me
no one See's me in the shadows.

Please help me!!
Help me to be free.
Take me out of the darkness
and take me to the light.
I beg you, just help me fight.

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 10 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    It has a good flow to it it kind of sounds like it could be lyrics to a song, well you could make it like that nice job!

  • 10 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Great poem!! Your good! It had TONS of emoiton.. And it sounded so desperate, like it was coming from personal experience, which is the best...

  • 11 years ago

    by Assyria

    The poem is a wonderful peice of artwork 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    |Wow, powerful and hard hitting. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, great work, i like the title of this it was kinda 'catchy'.

    brilliant work.
    5/5

    ~Murder