Missing You

Wow, very gd poem, how the hell did i miss it before? anyway i might write an inspirational poem when i've gotten over the whole girl with no name phase, im hoping its soon. anyway wt u mean its not the same, i thought u were still mad bout her?????? come on u trying to kill her bf's. lol. neway i hope this pain goes away soon cuz i know how it can hurt and i wouldnt wish it on my worse enemy(not that i have one)

anyway great use of rhyme and simple yet powerful words that bring across the pain u r projecting. jeez im starting to cry, no fair u such a gd poet. i envy u. kinda, not the pain but the talent. i do hope that u will soon stand again.

Very good

I loved this poem, and it so reminded me of the love that I lost some time ago. Beautiful written, but then again, so are all your poems. Keep it up 5/5 ;)

David, you are so right, somehow this poem made me feel soo much better.... thanks

This poem was soooo sweet, i loved it! Your expression is amazing, great job! 5/5 definitely!