Crime Scene Waltz

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 2, 2006

And yet the music plays again
With all the violence seeping in
The player plays
The victim dies
The killer covers up with lies
Hidden is the blood stained knife
The one used to rob the victim of
His life
The washer washes the dirty clothes
He hides the evidence so no one
The body's found
The siren sounds
The killer runs like a dog from the
A man is arrested but they got the wrong one
The killer had his deadly fun
The secret's kept
The charges remain
The innocent suffers the killer's pain
The dance goes on
The music's back
Violence is something he doesn't
And yet the music plays again
With all the violence seeping in

Rates and comments would be appreciated.


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  • 10 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Haha damn jen this was good. gave me more ideas for some poems.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I think that there was a lot of great details. I really enjoyed this piece...


  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Eh, I didn't much get into it.
    It told a story, and I kind of felt the emotion, but nothing seemed to click for me...
    And the flow was off.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm


    i can see the emotions, and the sadness you did express your feelings well with this one!

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Greta flow and alot of truth this poem has one word to describe it EXCELLENT 5/5 for making me think