Silver Eyes

by Natalie   Jul 5, 2006


Who's that little girl in my reflection,
Crying and asking for some affection?
I can see the tears in her silver eyes,
They're showing no matter how hard she tries.

She's wanting to reach out for some support,
Because she feels this is her last resort.
Her cold fragile hands won't stop shaking,
And her beating heart just keeps on breaking.

What is she thinking inside of her head?
Is she afraid of what may lie ahead?
There's too many decisions to be made,
To keep her away from the dangerous blade.

Her image slowly starts to disappear,
But around me her voice I can still hear.
As she fades away into the bright light,
I struggle to keep her here with a fight.

Who was that young girl in my reflection,
Crying and asking for some affection?
I can see the tears in my silver eyes,
As I look up it's then I realize.

The little girl who was crying is me.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

{Done for contest. And, I got first.}

Please leave a comment if you downvote it. So I know how I can improve it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    I love it. The last line is pretty haunting, and I love the basic descriptin 'Silver eyes'. Anyways, I pretty mch love all your work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by CaptainTyingKnots

    Yup i added u to my favs like i thought i would

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    I felt the ideas in the poem have been very over-done by other poets in the past. You did a good job with the language but the idea seemed very plain so i didn't like it as much. Well written anyhow and good use of repition.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I can see why you got first place! that was a very good poem and definitely could feel the emotions... great job

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    Absolutly love the first stanza! great job once again! keep up the writting!