A Tarnished Mirror

by Jessica   Oct 7, 2006


Violently scratching at my hysterical pale reflection
Screaming with annoyance when blood doesn't appear
Staring plaintively at every defect and imperfection
Fiery hatred burns into pupils, black trickles in salty tears..

Staring into a tarnished mirror, staring at another me
Hiding away beneath layers of slaughtered, damaged skin
Lays a soul trapped within, it cannot escape, cannot be free
Slowly forming solid fists, my perplexed head starts to spin..

Silently pounding a stained mirror, I split into pieces
Crimson pain runs from my fists, cracks in me finally show
A perfect life crumbling to the ground, a soul it releases
Magic within me flows away, a remedy you did bestow..

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  • 17 years ago

    by ModernDavinci

    You're a really, really good writer. Your stuff is amazing. I realyl enjoyed this one - it struck a nerve somewhere within me. Somewhere deep. Keep up the good work. =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    The only bad thing i can find aobut your poetry is that the lines a a little long, so the flow is a little.. confusing.

    Other than that this poem is so beautiful and amazing. its awesome. i love it. it shows the life and struggles of so many girls(and guys)
    Very Emotive.!!
    5|5

    x.x:Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by endless tears

    Wow way dark but a great poem i liked it good job 5/5 for me..

  • 17 years ago

    by melissa

    Your poem is very well written it definitly made me think...i look forward to reading some more of your poems................have a wondermous day lol.....~missy~

  • 17 years ago

    by Failed Attempt

    Dark and powerful i can mauch relate to all those feelings above
    take care
    xoxox

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