Control {Cinquain}

by Natalie   Jan 9, 2007


Crying,
Into the night,
Waiting for one more chance,
To take control of her own life,
Alone.

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A Cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem that
consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4,
6, 8, 2 lines.
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  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very good job. These structured short forms are hard to pull off....you did it. 5/5. Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    Wow i really liked this short cinquain good poem and loved the structure ;) good job. Plz read mine and comment im sure u could relate to them .

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Natalie where have u been! its been ages since i read a poem from u. i think i can relate to this poem.. neway good job on it. keep posting!!! hope u had a happy xmas and all the best for the new year xx

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