Intoxicated Whispers

by Gem   Jan 15, 2007

"You're so hot; you make me want to scream"
"I think you're being just a bit extreme"
"No, I'm serious, you're so damn pretty"
"I'm not interested, such a pity"

"But I want to feel you, kiss you so much"
"No you don't, so please don't touch"
"But you look so hot in that red dress"
"Oh please, could you just give it a rest"

"How about me and you go back to mine?"
"I don't think so, have you lost your mind?"
"But baby, I'll show you what a real man's like"
"I won't tell you again, just take a hike!"

"But I just can't control myself around you"
"Well sorry, I guess you'll have to learn to"
"But don't you want to have some fun with me?"
"Thank you but no, I have to disagree"

"Look, stop hassling me, trying to touch
I don't want to be in your drunken clutch
Intoxicated whispers are all that I hear
Maybe next time, but without the beer" ©


(Wasn't sure what catagory to put it in, i thought it had a touch of humour though so here we go)


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  • This was very well written. It was funny. Good job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This was a really good was kinda funny but also true for some people....good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by daisha

    This poem was put in the right catagory

  • 11 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Lol this poem was great. i loved the rhyming and the flow of it was great. keep up the good work =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ally

    YEPP im pretty sure that was the best i've seen in a long time

    -and mind you it was pretty funny as well. GOOD JOB