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by Independence Forever Apr 3, 2007
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Amid-st war and diversity the bell rang
the people shouted and oh how they sang
through cannon and musket fire they marched
with wounds, hunger and many a man parched
signatures placed on beautifully written text
to face the troubles of treason, all were vexed
independence like a torrent came rolling on America's shores
the unanimous vote would bring contention and more sores
oh but that liberty bell rang loud and clear
ringing in independence for all colonist to hear
the war was far from being over, the worst was yet to come
but with a new start, all prepared to wipe away tyranny scum
on the 4th the bell rang, rising in volume cleansing the world
for upon the inhabitants of this hemisphere, hope unfurled
I liked it. Great flow, diffrent, well pinned. all in all an awesome write and an even better read.5/5
I liked it!! Not many people know how to write about this and I think you did a fabulous job! nicely done!
Good job. good description and topic. keep it up.
Well done!!!! i love it 5/5 =] its so good im going to read ur other poems
I liked how you portrayed this poem really good write. Well done ~mel