The sun shines smile
I can see your face
That brings my day complete,
A cold wind blew
Reminds me all day
That you just here by my side,
Every rain drops
That falls down in my cheek
Filled my loneliness,
Stars and moon so bright
Telling me that your my light
When i am in the dark,
Hills, valleys and mountains
I look up and gaze
To realize that you were there,
Lakes, oceans and seas
Keep remembering, that these are..
My Beautiful memories from the past!
**This is for my brother,, i just remembered him so i decided to write a poem , will since we both a nature lover i wrote this way... I'm already move on and accepted the fact the he is now only living in my heart and w/ his beautiful memories from the past. so life must go on and on.,, and i hope we will see each other again someday. imiss u bro!!!**
The imagery here was outstanding.
and you're choice of words was simply
amazing, as well as the flow. :]
you've created kind of a mysterious mood
to the poem, which i really like. and the
emotion, itself, being captured is great too.
a very beautiful write. :] 5/5.