My Mother

by Goran Rahim   May 13, 2007

So many times
She remained hungry In order to feed me.
When I was in pain,
She didn't sleep crying with me.

I remember once I was ill
Doctors told her I will die.
With her teary eyes,
She begged the doctors
To say it was a lie.

In this special day
I don't know what to recall,
What anguish that she took because of me?
How she gave up all the happiness of her life,
Just to see me happy.

Happy mother's day my dear mom,
You are truly the greatest mother.
I hope to see your smile forever,
If you are ever sad, I die rather.


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  • 11 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this is such a sweet poem. my mother is the same way she would give up everything and anything in order to make sure me and my sister are happy and healthy. I'm glad that your mother is the same way. This poem shows a very strong woman. Such a sweet tribute. The only critique I have is the last line, "I'd die rather" I know its set up that way to make it rhyme but it doesnt sound right.

  • 11 years ago

    by bacha

    Great poem thou :):)..
    it very touching one and great job pall

    for sure our mom's mean so much to us and you pall you show it :):):):)... i dont have any thing to say but (wonderfull):):):)..

    keep on :)

  • 11 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    This is soo good!! And soo sweet!

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw, such a beautiful and wonderful write you have wrote for your mother. I know I'm late on this comment. I finally have time. But well done. Really, any mother that would read this would be proud. Keep up the awesome work! God bless 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by J e s s x

    Weird!! its okay though x