Wow this is such a sweet poem. my mother is the same way she would give up everything and anything in order to make sure me and my sister are happy and healthy. I'm glad that your mother is the same way. This poem shows a very strong woman. Such a sweet tribute. The only critique I have is the last line, "I'd die rather" I know its set up that way to make it rhyme but it doesnt sound right.
Aw, such a beautiful and wonderful write you have wrote for your mother. I know I'm late on this comment. I finally have time. But well done. Really, any mother that would read this would be proud. Keep up the awesome work! God bless 5/5