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by Goran Rahim Sep 11, 2011
Love, romance /
If I was not a hostage of your look
I would have been
The happiest person of this town
Arrested in your love
I am in search of myself
Until sun sets downAt nights,
Thinking of you
I am awake
Staring at the wall,
Similar to my heart
I am thrown
Someone doesn't care at all.
It's a dfficult situation to be infatuated with someone that doesn't care. I like your clever wording and effectiveness of the poem.
Very well written! I enjoyed the form of the poem. It was sad, sweet and had rhythm. 5/5
I think you did a really good job capturing the sense of frustration and sadness with this poem.
by Lauren denbow
Amazing poem so true
by the pale queen of the silent night
so very glad to hear you are back :)...an excellent job as always....