Hostage of Your Look

by Goran Rahim   Sep 11, 2011


If I was not a hostage of your look

Perhaps

I would have been

The happiest person of this town

Now

Arrested in your love

Everyday

I am in search of myself

Until sun sets down

At nights,

Thinking of you

I am awake

Staring at the wall,

Similar to my heart

I am thrown

As

Someone doesn't care at all.

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  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    It's a dfficult situation to be infatuated with someone that doesn't care. I like your clever wording and effectiveness of the poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    Very well written! I enjoyed the form of the poem. It was sad, sweet and had rhythm. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    I think you did a really good job capturing the sense of frustration and sadness with this poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    Amazing poem so true

  • 14 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    Hello,
    so very glad to hear you are back :)...an excellent job as always....

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