Hmmm...once again i am left speechless. This poem showed so much, yet left me wanting even more. I mean that in the best way possible. It made me want to hear the story...to comfort you in any way i can. It left me feeling empty as if i needed to do something...anything really. I throughouly enjoyed it though...for not many poems can do that to me. You have a gift and i reccomend that you share it with the world. Let everyone feel what i was feeling during that poem...let that light shine throughout! I bid you adue for now...with one last thing,
just remember that your poetry speaks your heart and soul...always be honest in poetry and never subdue your emotion. 4.5/5
The last two lines are completely perfect. I loved this. God! You are such a good poet...its crazy. In all the poems of yours that I've read, I haven't really found any flaws at all! I can relate to this so, so much. It just made me feel less alone. 5/5 for sure.
Aahhh . i loved it. i was reading your profile and i was like omg he is like the greatest guy in the world.. i knew it was too good to be true. all the perfect ones are gay. well i love your writing. its amazing and i look forward to reading more. :D