I Don't Deserve Your Perfect Love

by IdTakeABulletForYou   May 14, 2007


Empty here, without your eyes
--Broken, and it's no surprise.
You left; I wasn't good enough.
I don't deserve Your Perfect Love.

You are too good for boys like me;
You'll always be a Fantasy.
The ones to See, But never Touch
-- What I Need and Want so Much

You are the One I want to Hold
-- It's no surprise you chose to go.
I know my love shall never meet
The greatness to whom I compete.

There is no more significance
-- Love's based on just appeal...
I know my body won't suffice;
There's not a heart my face could steal.

Here, you lock me --here, I'm bound--
Locked In chains, I Rocket Down
You walked away (I'm in the dark )
And Left me here to Sit and Rot

And everyone's pasts are full of mistakes;
Although mine depicts many more than most make...
I don't really see someone falling for me
So I guess I'll just drown in absurd fantasies...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sabree

    Hmmm...once again i am left speechless. This poem showed so much, yet left me wanting even more. I mean that in the best way possible. It made me want to hear the story...to comfort you in any way i can. It left me feeling empty as if i needed to do something...anything really. I throughouly enjoyed it though...for not many poems can do that to me. You have a gift and i reccomend that you share it with the world. Let everyone feel what i was feeling during that poem...let that light shine throughout! I bid you adue for now...with one last thing,
    just remember that your poetry speaks your heart and soul...always be honest in poetry and never subdue your emotion. 4.5/5
    -Sabree

  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    The last two lines are completely perfect. I loved this. God! You are such a good poet...its crazy. In all the poems of yours that I've read, I haven't really found any flaws at all! I can relate to this so, so much. It just made me feel less alone. 5/5 for sure.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    That was a really good poem. keep writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade Bassindale

    This.Is.Amazing!

    Its Reli Gurd.Seriousli!

    Erm, Yeah,I Just Joined So I Not Quite Sure How To Work It Yet, So..

    Help Me?

    This Poems reli gurd! Reminds me abit of my ex girlfriend, lol...

    xx <3 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Aahhh . i loved it. i was reading your profile and i was like omg he is like the greatest guy in the world.. i knew it was too good to be true. all the perfect ones are gay. well i love your writing. its amazing and i look forward to reading more. :D

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