Beauty has found a name (pictures)

by The Poetic Child   Jun 8, 2007

Just open the links as you see them, follow along
and I hope you enjoy
I know its long but I think its worth reading

You see this man "was" me, he seems very proud
He looks like a man who speaks his mind aloud
But the truth is he's not, he stands there weak
Looking for someone special to help him speak

Living through a life of being laughed at for weight
laying down on his bad, thinking of everyone he hates
for picking on his size, for noticing the tears on his eyes
He was a true example of a person, who uses a disguise

Wanting to just leave school, giving no one a chance
how could this be, its himself that he just cant stand
he spit so much anger in a mic, it even hurt his throat
the fire just spit out, with only one targeted place to go

But then he found someone special, she was real
He has himself a winner, its her soul he feels
a girl with almost the same past with a little twist
feeling such desire when I even kiss those lips

This girl just changed his whole entire world
opened a new package, and let it un-twirl
This girl is so precious to me, my life is full
she completes my soul..Man shes so beautiful

So he Gained so much confidence he felt so good
He started to feel that he was so understood
Lost so much weight turned anger into muscle
His life seemed so fast, starting moving in a hustle

He just keeps staring at this photograph..His motivation
reaching his goal, reaching for the stars, no hesitation
when he sees this beautiful girl, glaring back at him
He just gets so excited. He's no longer feeling grim

Shes so beautiful, sometimes he feel as if he dont desereve her
But he has these dreams of where shes his wife and a mother
And he just gets reminded that she loves him and he loves her
He just feels such a passion of love the second he hugs her

To him this is so real, hes finally happy..wants it to stay
He loves how he gets reminded hes loved everyday
And her returns the favor, by reminding her of her beauty
Shes so much more then pretty, shes so much more then a cutie

She is so beautiful in his eyes, she means so much
its just not lust, he feels her soul when they touch
the second they hold hands or hug, he feels the fame
He's just on top of the world..beauy has found a name


I love you!


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Latest Comments

  • 10 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Aaaaaawwwwww! How sweet.

    ....nerd. :p

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    David this is a great poem

  • 11 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Awe! that was sooo cute! your girl friend must be a lucky gal. But some people aren't lucky enough to find someone who loves enough to write beautiful poetry 'bout them. Well good luck to you and yours. Ummmm... the poem was really good, but i'm afraid that i was not able to gaze upon the pics. But the writting was so good, i was able to paint a mental picture of what was going on. Good job, and keep up the amazing work... as usual. ttyl sumtime.


  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Good job :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Denise

    There is no
    i cant htink of any