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by Beauty In The Breaking Jun 13, 2007
Dark, fantasy /
The night has fallen
a new world has awakened,
and the creatures of the night come forth.
Do they terrify you?
In the shadows the vampires walk,
breathtaking beauty but oh so lethal
they'll steal your heart with a look
and feed from the fear you feel.
Are you brave enough to chance the streets
and walk with the eternally living?
Will you chance your soul to love them
or leave them to their pain?
Humans fear them because they are different
but theres more than what meets the eye
for they have no choice but to drink your blood
it's the only way for them to survive.
Do not fear the shadows or night
and embrace the kiss of eternity,
I'll reveal the beautiful wonders of night
in exchange for walking with me.
Eternal youth and beauty,
never to die or feel hunger,
be numb to the pain of the world if you wish
just give me your heart forever.
I promise no pain will come with this kiss
and never to leave you scared,
just leave behind your human soul
and walk the shadows beside me.
Welcome to the realm of the night,
the shadows, blood and romance
follow me down this dark road for eternity
and rule the night with the vampires.
by Pink Butterfly
Full of passion and beauty....I like how you constructed this amazing poem...god bless you!!!
Wow, so good. (i wrote something similar before.)
I like the powerful and magnificent atmosphere that you created. Your wording is superb, i like the last stanza the most. This poem deserves 5/5, if you want you can r/r/c one of mine.
Aww i like it...i love vampires and this was a good tribute to them...5 stars
by WiNgS Of StEeL
Beautiful poem!!..well written hehe i like vampires..well written
hope to read more like it!!:D
by Beautifully Broken
Hell, i love it, damn i really love it