The Jagged Edge

by MemoirsOfMe   Jun 16, 2007


It's dark now,
I can't see anymore.
I'm falling now,
Tumbling to the ocean floor.

My eyes are gaped to the surface,
Awaiting for a hand.
But I realize no one's there
As I slowly sink into the sand.

I've never felt such lonliness
While I watch the bubbles rise.
They're escaping with me here
Just waiting to die.

How pathetic I must look,
I bet I make mother proud.
I'm gasping for air with a twisted face
While water starts to enter my mouth.

My legs start to kick,
And my arms begin to flail.
The weights against my waist
Keep me from going anywhere.

My hands are bound by the words
Coursing through my tainted mind.
It says it's too late for mistakes,
You've run out of time.

One more chance,
Don't I get the final say?
But death has already been beckoned,
And starts to take me away.

Truth be told that I had no intention,
Yet sometimes we find our soul
Will tip over the jagged edge
And turn against its own.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Leslie

    I especially love the ending but the whole poem is awesome. It's not one of my favorite out of your poems but it is deffinatly a good one.
    ~Marigold

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    "I've never felt such lonliness
    While I watch the bubbles rise.
    They're escaping with me here
    Just waiting to die"

    The imagery in those lines was perfect. You have a way with words. Beautiful poem dear : )

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...Uh, not something I'm interested in. But it did flow well and I liked the images that came to mind during the piece. I do like the last two stanzas cuz well they went well together and tied up the piece quite nicely. It's just not something I'm into but I did find it was well done.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wow...I loved this. Whatever anyone else says, it was amazing. It was so deep and emotional and the flow was very smooth. I really liked how much you put into it. I'm so glad you're posting and writing again. This piece was beautiful, I can't wait to read more.
    <3Raych

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I thought this was really good. It has a lot of emotion behind the words.. Very good job. I really liked this one i might just read a few more when i get more time(if that ever happends lol) anyway Keep writing your an awesome poet!.. 5/5

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