Incomplete without you (Part I)

by Fsams   Jul 9, 2007


Why did you leave me
Without telling me the reason
Will you bring back to me
Our lovely romantic season

You told me to get away from you
For you wanted someone else to enter
If you had told me that before
I would have made way for her

You could have just told me
That you love someone else
I could have let you free
For your loving "someone else"

You don't know how much I
Craved for you, to be with you
You were so caring and daring
And I believed you were true

You made me feel special
You made my world real
And now you ignore me
Making my word surreal

(To be continued)

Written by Fsams
08/07/2007
Monday 9:36

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  • 9 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I LOVE THIS... ok had to get that out, you are an amazing poet i can't wait to read more.

  • 10 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Nice. it flowed really well. i liked the rythm to it. i give it a 7/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Annissha

    5/5 wow thiz poem waz excellent i loved every word of it..i could really relate 2 it so much...great flow..keep up the good work

    much luv
    peachez

  • 10 years ago

    by abcede

    Dude, love your ideas - just try to make it flow a little more!

  • Really sad poem. I've gone through this before n I really liked this poem. 5/5