Comments : Do You Love Me

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    So simple, quick and straight to the point. love the poem, it was excellent, your ability to write poems with such emotion is uncanny. well done.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I like this. its short and hold so much. the only suggestion is breaking it down into stanzas. i was reading through it and thought it would look and sound better.



  • 11 years ago

    by Mousie

    Awww goran it was so sweet. i always love the emotion in your poems. great job, i love it so much.

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    This short piece was quite beautiful and delightful to read, whereas its bitter and sweet at the same time. As always, I adored how such plain words of yours emanate volumes of touching emotions. It utterly tugged my heart, nonetheless.

    Best wishes,

  • 11 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow Dude this the right poem for me lol, i want ask that question to my girl also,this poem is one of my favorite from you... keep up your work 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by mrhope

    Do you mean it
    do you love me

    i dont know if she does or not, all i know is if she dont then she should be shameful of her self for not respecting the feelings of the poet i adore.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautifully penned poem, I can feel the emotions in it. The ending was perfect! I think everyone can relate to this amazing poem. Good job. Flow was flawless ^_^

    A perfect 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    Short and straight to the point.I can definitely relate to this poem.Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Wow... I seriously love it... so simply written... straight to the point, but REALLY beautiful. It's a very relatable poem too.. I love it... and I'll read more of your work tommorow because it's really great! :-) Good night!

  • 11 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    I agree with the person above me... It is very well had great flow and good rhythm ( which i still need to work on mine) lol... i like the words you used and the emotion that's in it... you are a great poet... i say 5/5 ^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I think there could be more in this poem then what you wrote. dont be afraid to throw it all in. this is bordering a bad love poem and a potential classic. You ahve great qualities like ending the poem with the title (i find that a great quality)

    'You lighted up my nights' is also a great line that I wish you'd added more things like this.

    A lot of readers don't like to read something they can see directly and know whats happening. they want to think but they still want to undertand it to an extent.

    There are lines in there i liked quite a lot so I'll give you a 4.5 for a good love poem. Not easy to get an excellent from me in love so 4.5 is very impressive from me.

    Thanks for sharing. and don't forget to hold up your end of the bargain.

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You know this piece was so simple yet so effective. You got straight to the point and made this poem so heartfelt and deep. Again you have gone into great depth to portrayed your emotions into such a capturing poem. I guess all I can say is beautiful for it was truely another stunning poem by you. Well done Goran. As always you have left me amazed. ~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Sad poem but i liked it, sometimes that simple question can be the hardest question to answer, well thats my opinion. but other than that it was a good poem. dast xosh!

  • 11 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was amazing. i loved the way you make the words melt together as one so it brings a strong picture in my mind. great work yet again. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Oscar

    This is a great example of how to make a poem with a lot of meaning behind it and say it in a few words. i like this one a lot better than 88 hours and feel that the message in this poem was delivered with much more passion than in the other poem. great job, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by freshta

    I must say YES i do love you
    i think that is what she will say to you

  • 11 years ago

    by Hope

    The poem was simple, yet profound.. I love the ay in which the whole thing flow.. Great Job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's funny how easily we can be fooled by a few simple words, I think our hearts always want to believe what we hear sometimes. amazing poem and great flow, very heartfelt. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

  • 10 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aww, this is a nice poem. i enjoyed it very much.. i rate this a 5

  • 10 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    The question that riddles the minds of many, i feel that this is one of the most asked questions in human existance, seemingly almost all live under the umbrella of love. nicely written, except for an expected ryhme (charm/arm). doesnt hurt the poem any though. (:

    good write.