Emotionless

by Valiantpenguin   Jul 30, 2007


When you leave
don't think I'll try to make you stay
because i won't
I'll let you walk away

i may be hurting
but i won't let it show
i may cry for you at night
but i won't let you know

I'll put on a happy face
just for you I'll laugh and smile
it won't be easy
but it'll only last for a while

when i get home
I'll think about us
but i won't bother you
i won't put up a fuss

and one day
I'll get sick of crying
it will all get old
and I'll get tired of trying

so there i will sit
my face expressionless
they'll all know
you left me emotionless...

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  • 17 years ago

    by paths of peace

    Omg this is amazing.
    it just sucks how he did that.
    right? yeah i know.
    gawd. but im still going through the process of crying all night.
    i guess your right, i will get tired.
    i really like this one bcuz it helped me.
    i read it every day. and i feel something different every time. AMAZING.
    heyy you should mssg me(:

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet

    That's really good hun

  • 18 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow. That was some really deep emotion.
    Your flow was amazing. I love the way your portray everything. You can say I was quite captivated!
    But one thing, maybe try and use capitalization?
    But other than that, great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 18 years ago

    by elle

    Heaps cool poem, really liked it.
    with love
    elle

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