I liked the subject, as well as the tone of the piece. It was very genuine. Some of the lines I thought were a little awkward, like in the second stanza. I felt the'why' could've been put on the last line, and in the last stanza, I felt the 'my' could've began the second line. Apart from that, it was a great piece, with a good flow.
*-I've Willed For Her To Cuddle Me,
Like She Used To Do
But The Cuddles Ended Years Ago, Why?
I Never Knew..-* that part was so deep. so sad. so many people can see themselves through that. nice work, really ^^
lol im gonna read your other work . 5/5 totally.