Everything ends

by cory   Sep 16, 2007


I know my death is coming soon
I can feel the ghastly rise of doom
All the night's i sat and cried
I just want them to know i tried
For all my days i have bestowed
A sense of security for those i know
It will now be betrayed
I just wish i could have stayed

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Gets straight to the point, 5/5. Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Hey good poem
    ill rate it and others 4 u

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like rhyming it looks little forced, but I like this poem a lot. You created powerful atmosphere with just a few words and expressed emotions greatly. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing. Really you are right I like your poems. So deep, meaningful and emotional. It all comes inside of you and making every word really step up. Great work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Wow.
    love your word choice
    your poems are really goood
    much emotion and deep

    =]louii xx

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