Vehement anger coupled with intense passion.
Inferno of action doused in tidal reaction.
Deep in the eye of the storm is a calm center.
Holding hard hearts, cold from perpetual winter.
It rains fiery hail, but the best is yet to come.
Never ending agony to which you will succumb.
Will you let it burn you alive and freeze you to death,
or let it bleed you dry as it steals your last breath?
Seems you cannot defeat this invisible force.
Unless you look within yourself to find the source.
You cannot lock outside what surely came from within.
Open your mind and heart; let the healing begin.
--every lost love becomes a stepping stone towards true love. The path you walk is unique to you.. it can interesect with many, but it always leads to one. Feeling lost? Feeling alone? Get up, stay strong and walk your path.-- :)
I like this one a lot...
The rhymes are very good, and you created intense atmosphere through the piece. The choice of words and the descriptions in it are excellent.
Very deep, too.
5/5 from me