I feel your pain

by Lance

As I stare into thine eyes
I see your pain, I hear your cries
I take you close and hold you tight
show you not to loose the fight
you let out tears upon my neck
you hate yourself, your life a wreck
when I'm there, i feel your love
I set you free, you are my dove
I see your eyes the pain is fading
your lovely eyes no longer shading
i hold you here inside my soul
we are lovers and we make a whole


Submission date : 2008-02-13
Last edit : 2008-02-13

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xXSomeoneLoveMeXx ( F C ) at 2008-04-25

I love the flow and the meaning of this poem :)

Raul ( D ) at 2008-05-22

OMG this poems was fantastic added to my favorites

Kylie ( F C ) at 2008-06-10

Excellent work.

"i hold you here inside my soul
we are lovers and we make a whole."

I loved that part. Great poem.

Broken Masquerade ( F C D ) at 2009-11-16

I love this.. and i can totally relate to that feeling.. this poem was amazing. written flawlessly. 5/5

Black Heart Still Beating ( F P C ) at 2009-11-16

Awww. thats really cute. it has tones of emotion. good job.


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