Submission date : 2008-06-30
Kristina ( F P C D )
Wow babe. This.. is uber powerful.
wonderful use of imagery...its utterly breathtaking... and, im really speechless.
Its amazing, as you are babe.
She'll come back...
Aish ( F P C D )
very very very good!!!!!!!!! love the language and the imagery!!!
a devastating ending, brilliant writing
S R P ( F P C D )
This poem was absolutely amazing. I loved it, and honestly, there's nothing I would have improved. Thank you for sharing.
I dont even know what to say
this poem is great
Phantasmagoria ( F P C D )
"exhaustion laces through her sweet fingers"