Submission date : 2005-03-23
Enslavement_of_Beauty ( F P C D )
Well, as for the poem, some of the rhyms seemed somewhat forced, but they worked out okay...
The thought behind the poem is very important...and the sad truth for many.
"I cover myself with makeup and blush
Even though my parents say their is no need for such!"
That's the best part of it...
Beauty sure is a killer...
i love it its beautiful and you have more talent in writing thani do i know this because this isnt the first poem of yours ive read im doing the 10 for10 deal i dont even know you but you seem like a beautiful person to me
lisa marie ( F P C D )
we are all beautiful. each and every one of us. :)
Jacqui Armstrong ( F P C D )
this is a touvhing poem.. and im sure you are beautiful! everyne is beautiful in their own way.
just remember be yourself dont try to be something you arn't.
It's a different beautiful for everyone.