Lotus Flower (Lento)

by Elapsed   Feb 8, 2008


Rising above a murky depth
Blooming with remarkable beauty
Dancing in a mid summer's breeze
Bathing in glory of untouched purity

Symbolized through clarity of hearts
Memorized by their colourful verity
Immortalized in joyful melodies
Appraised in sketch for its bounty

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sirrah

    Good job...nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by adroit

    This poem is as pure and perfect as what it depicts. There is no higher praise than that, surely.

  • 17 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Hmm that style i have never seen but the words were something powerful, i enjoyed it thanx 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Yes! This was absolutely breathtaking. Like Cindy said in my minds eye I can see the whole picture of this beautiful delicate flower taking on the world in striving to reach its peak. Beautiful imagery.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful Lento...one of my favorite forms....interesting subject, the lotus, very symbolic.....love it!

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