Untitled (Confusion)

by Sarah   Feb 10, 2008


I walk through a tunnel
Filled with darkness and gloom
I walk closer
I am seeing a menacing room

Noises coming from across the cabinet
I open the light
A dreadful skeleton appears in front of me
I am loosing my sight

I fall onto the bed
And held my hands up high
As I run the gun through my fist
And cry the words "Die, die, die!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Didnt really get it, maybe bcuz its not inplied wat it mean, but i likes lines
    ~I walk through a tunnel
    Filled with darkness and gloom~

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    I dont think it was confusing at all excellent job

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    I don't know about this one, pretty deep. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sarah,

    What a frightening story you have penned here! But it was well written, lol.

    Take care,

    XXIngrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Maiden Of Darkness

    It's was good, I like it.

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