Wow. That was some intense stuff. I've never gone through this, but I could feel the emotion as if it was really happening to me.. I love how at the end she gets brave and fights and how she says "I'm sorry Daddy, But I am NOT your little who.re."
There was a little spelling error.
"Every flench, every tear."
^^Flench should be flinch. :]
Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. It had so much tension in this. You kind of described me, but in my case, it wasn't my dad, it was my cousin. Anyway, the imagery and the flow were just right. The choice of words were great. 5/5<---wish I could give it more because it deserves it.
I'm glad to know this is not from personal experiance but you wrote it with such power that it was real convincing. I liked tht title because it summed up the poem as a whole perfectly. There were some parts where the flow was rocky but the emotions were so strong that it made up for it. Well done *5/5*
I can say this was a "very nice" nor can I say "it was beutiful" poem but it was very well writtened and it amaze me that you can write it so good even if you haven't experienced it. It kicked ass, in other words =) 5/5
Wow, this is a really good poem. You are very talented! It's so scary to think this really happens... and you made it seem so real in your writing... good work! 5/5! Sorry i didn't r/r/c sooner! i've been super busy but... i'm going to make sure and get it done today! take care! you write beautifully!
Im glad this is not a personal experience, things like this happen in our world and they are guite tradgic.
The words flowed well, and you certainly held my attention. I really like the outcome and how you ended the piece.
A strong emotional write, that is unfortunatly relatable to some people.
Okay, wow. This made me cringe. The whole time I read it. Ah I'm shuddering just thinking about it. This entire poem was strong, and creepy. But in a good way, of coarse. [: The rhyme scheme was good, very constant. The flow was pretty close to perfect, and overall, the poem was a fantastic read! [: 5/5
WOW an amazing poem...when first reading I thought it was real..but in the end it wasn't...I hate to think that someone out there is going through this and its sad...but its such an amazing poem thought wouldn't change a thing...5/5
Wow.. That was a really good peom. And I'm very glad this is not a personal experience. Very emotional, you almost had me in tears becuase of the strong emotion. This is one of the reasons i'm going to become a Social worker to stop monsters like that. Anyway very good job on this it flows perfect. 5/5