I feel your pain

by Lance   Feb 13, 2008


As I stare into thine eyes
I see your pain, I hear your cries
I take you close and hold you tight
show you not to loose the fight
you let out tears upon my neck
you hate yourself, your life a wreck
when I'm there, i feel your love
I set you free, you are my dove
I see your eyes the pain is fading
your lovely eyes no longer shading
i hold you here inside my soul
we are lovers and we make a whole

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  • 16 years ago

    by Black Heart Still Beating

    Awww. thats really cute. it has tones of emotion. good job.
    5outa5

    **Bri

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    I love this.. and i can totally relate to that feeling.. this poem was amazing. written flawlessly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    Excellent work.

    "i hold you here inside my soul
    we are lovers and we make a whole."

    I loved that part. Great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxRaulXxx

    OMG this poems was fantastic added to my favorites

  • 17 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    I love the flow and the meaning of this poem :)

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