UNTITLED!!!!!!!!!

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Feb 14, 2008


She stared out the window at the grayness around
She was feeling so depressed, tired of the ups and downs
Her eyes are filled with renewed tears, cascading like streams
Love is never perfect and nothing's what it seems

He spat such beautiful lies, killed her so well
Now this feeling of betrayal was hurting like hell
The trust was shattered and faith was diminished
Love is treading a thin line, almost finished

But his jade eyes were haunting her, calling her once more
She turned right back around before walking out the door
He had her where he wanted her, his hand around her heart
Sure he could heal it but he'd rather tear it apart

He squeezed it full of pain, sorrow and hurt
Instead of treating her well she felt like dirt
His voice always called to her, oh so sweet
Leaving her only in depression and defeat

But she thought she knew no better, love is blind
And a good guy is oh so hard these days to find
She was treated like a door mat, just wipe your feet
Everything he wanted, every goal she'd meet

He smiled at her sorrow and laughed at her pain
She was losing everything and there was nothing to gain
But she kept on pushing onward, hoping he'd change
But as you could've guessed, he's just the same...

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    MAN! That was amazing, the flow and rhyme were so good. But your wording was just perfect. The last line was soooo good!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Hey great poem. As for a title......Something like "Some things never change." The main idea is that this guy hasn't changed and he's still hurting you right? So I guess having something about change in the title would make sense. I'm rubbish at thinking up titles but I thought I'd give it a shot anyway =)

    Beautiful, if very sad poem. Full of emotion.

    5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Well... gr8888 job... i could feel the pain in between the lines. Enjoyed it soo much.
    umm the title could be "behind his eyes...stands a lie"... just a suggestion u know...

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I love this poem.... uhm maybe you could title "he's just the same"....thats just a suggestion...

    as for the poem it was flawless..i enjoyed reading it.5/5

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