Invisibly Broken

by Michelle18   Feb 15, 2008


Invisibly broken,
Inside I am dying.
I pretend that I'm happy,
But I really feel like crying.

I say I'm alright,
But thats not at all true.
I'm depressed all the time,
I'm always feeling blue.

There's nothing you can say,
To ever make me smile.
This heartache that I have,
Has been here for a while.

He hates me now,
And its no one's fault but mine.
I guess I'll be invisibly broken,
Until the end of time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww.. :[[ I can definitely relate. I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I really liked the title, and well how you used "invisibly broken" throughout the poem. I wish it had been longer. I would have kept reading. Maybe you could have used some more descriptive words, but truthfully I like it how it is. Great job! :]]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Very sad
    flows good
    but... honestly... i expected more.. i mean, you just tell your feelings (good wording btw), but this idea of "invisibly broken" is so good
    maybe you can add some powerful metaphors to make this poem more expressive
    like... well when i first read the title, i thought abt sea when surface is still but in the depth it's not so or something like that
    that was just my idea
    but anyways your poem is good

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