Sorry

by Michelle18   Feb 19, 2008


I'm sorry for being born,
And for being in your life.
I'm sorry for never being wrong,
And for always being right.
I'm sorry for loving you,
And for always being there.
I'm sorry for being true,
And for showing you I care.
I'm sorry for saying "I love you"
And for giving you hope and faith.
I'm sorry for thinking I needed you,
And for thinking you'd keep me safe.
But mostly I'm sorry for dating you,
And thinking love was what I found.
But I'm not sorry for hating you,
And for no longer being around.

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  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its good one ,nice write and simple words show your point and how its strong,nice flow ,5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Awwwww, very sad....
    this poem is unique. so many feelings mixed in this poem!! the repition of "i'm sorry for" makes it flow good and emphasizes the emotion of the poem
    like in last your poem i've commented,the ending is unexpected and changes the whole meqaning and it's great. your poems are like a pazzle with an answer in the end, lol))
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by she

    Wow, this hit home for me, i thought it was really good! 100/100

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great write! You've managed to use sorry many different times without wearing out the word! Thats talented... The flow was good, the word usage was great, and the concept was really good! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    I really liked this one. I kept hoping that it wasn't going to turn out badly :( I think you've done well because you've managed to keep the flow equal with repeating "I'm sorry" without it getting monotonous. Well done 5/5 xxx

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