Tears (Senryu)

by Ingrid   Feb 19, 2008


Tears fall down upon
my heaving chest embedding
a heart torn apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid
    Excellent job on this form. So much can be said and felt with few words.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lol! I knew that was a misspell Hellon!

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Such heartbreaking words hun.. what a wonderful job you have done of expressing this deep and painful emotion.. a fantastic job indeed!!