Done With You

by Beautiful Forever   Feb 22, 2008


You whisper softly in my ear,
All the words I want to hear,
As my eyes begin to glow,
A new side of you begins to show,

You walk away, leaving me alone,
And I'm surprised at what you've shown,
I can't believe you walked out on me,
And at how you've done it so easily,

You're always doing this,
Leaving me alone and pissed,
Killing my soft-beating heart,
Ripping at it, and tearing it apart,

You come back each week,
But evil is all you seek,
Any chance to crush my dreams,
Or slowly pull me apart at the seams,

But this time I'm through,
I won't waste any more time on you,
I'll take your emotions from my chest,
And throw you away, leaving me to rest.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Powerful words in this poem. i like the way you rhyme 2 stanza's and then the next 2. its brilliant. definatly unique. the structure was great too. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Woooo..u kicked a** with this one lol...

    its strong and powerful and i could feel the emotions and anger jump out of the page...

    the flow was flawless and the rhyming was on point the entire time...

    loved it. this is one of my favorites from you.

    definately 5/5 ..its well deserved.