Our own Love Story

by Unknown Substance   Feb 26, 2008


No we're not in a book
Or on the TV screen
But everywhere we go
Our love is always seen

No we're not a wonderful poem
Or a painting hanging high
But our love we share together
Could make the angels cry

No we're not a beautiful song
or a happy ending fairy tale
but our love is like heaven
and hits you like hell

We are our own love story
And no i do not mind
Because our own love story
Is my favorite kind

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  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Beautiful as always

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Beautiful poem. the first stanza is truly fantastic.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    "We are our own love story
    And no i do not mind
    Because our own love story
    Is my favorite kind"

    Ahhh!! That paragraph gave me goosebumps! I loved it, you tied the poem together so perfectly with that. I couldn't stop thinking about my boyfriend Josh whenever I read this.. it was a beautiful love poem, one of a kind! The rhyming was amazing, as usual, and the entire poem just captured my heart. I loved it, you are sooo so amazing. Tell me whenever a new one comes out, okay? I can't wait! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by aMBerERiN

    HEy this poem is really good. just thought i would let you know that. keep writing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Kerry Gardiner

    No we're not a wonderful poem
    Or a painting hanging high
    But our love we share together
    Could make the angels cry

    awww tabby i love this pome i know just what you mean i love this part the most great work girl keep it up 5/5