One word(Tetractys)

by Ingrid   Mar 6, 2008


With
just one
word he broke
my heart in two
and left me to wither and die: loser

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very heart breaking piece you have here, with such simple works you have expressed such sorrow and pain. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love this short and sweet little gem Ingrid! The one word at the end "loser" makes the whole thing! Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem Ingrid, full of emotions although it was short

    i can feel your pain

  • 16 years ago

    by Skye x0x0x

    NICEE ONE sad and Im sorry if u ever have felt like this.. but it is a good job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid what a sad poem. You hvae packed allot of emotion in this short piece.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy