by StandStill Mar 9, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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A little girl |
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:/ I'm in a depressing mood. |
by alexis
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Wow your poem is amazing every time i log on this is one of the fist places i go to because it such an awesome poem.....5/5 exallent!! =) |
by Alvaro
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Do you know how my veins stopped their blood flow? it was reading this stanza and how soft the last line just kissed the seal |
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That was an aweosme poem i loved it |
by Sarah
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Cool poem. The last stanza was awesome! you did very well in this poem. Keep writing. 5/5 |