Alone

by Amber   Mar 14, 2008


Mommy, where are you?
Please stop, hiding I counted
to 20 and looked all over.

Why are so many kids here?
Maybe their Mommy's are
hiding also.

Mommy I am waiting for
you. It seems like hours
have gone by.

Tick tock goes
the clock.

I do not like this game
anymore. I want you to
come back.

Please, I want you to
say you love me one
more time.

I know I am bad
but I promise I
will be good.

Your back! But when
I turn around, it is
not you.

Who are you? What
do those papers mean?
I see my name on them.

Don't touch me! I
don't know you! I
am going to wait
for my mommy no
matter what.

She is coming back,
I know it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Wow this poem was great. even though it didn't happen to me i could feel the emotion and the pain that was being expressed. i was so touched by it. all your poems are great :].

    ((by the way thanks for commenting on my poem :] ))

    ((and my names amber too hahaa just thought id add that))

    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awww..this is very sad, and the ending was perfect for it. Thank you for the comment and have a Happy Easter!

  • 16 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    It was a different style of writing poetry and although i'm not familiar with it, it still displayed the emotions very well. good job, keep it up :]

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    I felt the emotion in this poem it made me sad
    :(
    well written
    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Thank you so much for the comment :D

    But this poem is just another amazing poem by you. WOnderful job :D<333

    Keep up the good work my dear :D

    Courtney :D

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