Reminiscense of a Serial Killer

by Beautiful Forever   Mar 15, 2008


The torture is propelling,
My mind is compelling,
Anything I see,
These thoughts are deadly,

A shine of silver flashes,
The fire reflects in the ashes,
A crescendo catches my attention,
Just more of my past, I won't mention,

Screams of death echo all around,
The corpses move inside the ground,
Death lingers over my shoulder,
Moving closer as I get older,

It's going to get me one day,
And I know what I'll say,
"I'm not sorry for what I've done",
"I'll only fall to my own gun",

With that I'll put the gun on my head,
Preparing myself to join the dead,
The last crescendo will echo all around,
As I join the victims, underground.

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  • 15 years ago

    by DistantKisses

    Oh. Wow. I'm next to speechless! Throughout the poem, I could see everything play out in my head. It was amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Nice poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A rather good piece. It was very well written, and was worded brillaintly. It also had a great flow and great rhymes. I could really sense the character, I could almost hear them speaking the words ( I know that sounds a little over the top, but its true).

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by moon face

    WOW great job dude u really nailed it
    Great Vocab.
    Great everything u really drew a dark thought in my mind u really got what t takes to be a poet i would love to read more of ur work

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Hmm, it was different. I liked it. I loved the word choice and the flow. 5/5

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