The Crucifix of my tearful eyes.

by Teria   Mar 18, 2008


The Crucifix of my tearful eyes.

Superficial wishes for earthly kinds of things,
mixed with numerous colors of cherry tomatoes.

The droplets disperse onto the ground -
losing their place, left not found. . .
To die alone, they fear each night;
not more seems the least bit right.

The crucifix of my tearful eyes,
has ruined all the hidden lies . . .

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** Title by: Kaila

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This is very original, powerful from the beginning to the end. I like your choice of words and the structure of this piece. You created great flow, too along with remarkable imagery in each stanza.
    Whole poem is effective and the metaphor that you used is truly creative and interesting.
    Greatly done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Very powerful titole. i love it.

    woah, i again good way with words,
    teh rhyming scheme good.

    didn't quite get it. i was impressed with it though

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Hey, I really did not get the first stanza, but I loved the other ones. Maybe you could expand that last part too! Keep writing!

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