My love, My best friend

Man ull surely get what u want in this piece of writing its like the Ring to a wedding

It was a nice & sweet poems..

This poem touched me from beginning to end. The flow here, although broken in some parts, was amazing. The choosing of words expressed such deep emotions... The rhymes were off in some places, like: here and here. Don't use the same words for rhyming. That's all I think, well done 5/5

How can I describe,
All of these emotions,
And put into words,
The size of my devotion,

I don't think it is possible,
But at least I shall try,
You are my one and only,
In whom I will confide,

^^ Two stanzas I appreciated the most. With love in our lives, we are empowered beyond belief.. Love is the very essence and core of our being…Everyone in life has a deep-rooted desire to love and be loved. A cute and very romantic piece coming from a guy. Excellent piece. 5/5

It`s totally you with some flowing mistakes, lol.

"You have given me so much,
I can't describe it here,
I hunger for your touch,
I want you with me here."
^^ It fit fine, but it just didn't sound right for some reason, it kind of took the. . . charm away. I think more because "hunger" isn't so, yeah. That you know? Lol, it still is fine there, it just through me off.

Other than that an amazing poem
You did a wonderful job with it, and I'm glad to see you're more Daniel-ish by the day. (:
Lol.