"How can I describe" i love the way u started it, it is very effective
that poem is amazing so very well expressed and deep in emotion it was definitly written from the heart
"i love you more then life" i feel the same about my bf, that certainly tells how mcuh you care about her and that u would do anything
great job
5/5

Really sweet poem.

Really sweet poem.

Really sweet poem.

Very Sweet And Touching Poem. ~5~

I really like this poem a whole lot. I like how you are able to express yourself and just touch the core of what's inside. Really sweet.

"How can I describe,
All of these emotions,
And put into words,
The size of my devotion,"

This was a very effective way to start of your piece. It caught my attention. and held it into the following stanzas.

"You bring a smile to my face,
Every time I hear your voice,
You make my heart begin to race,
Even if it's not my choice."

This stanza was very sweet, I think you portrayed it very well. You gotta love it, when love makes you unable to control yourself:)

"I will treat you like a queen,
I will give you love with ease,
This world may be diseased,
But you are my vaccine,"

This stanza blew my mind, It so sweet, and so so... Rare. Haha sorry im at a loss of words... But its amazing how you portrayed the immensity of your love in this witty way.

This piece, was amazing overall. I really really enjoyed it. Your very talented, and Im sure your girl friend will love it.

5/5 amazing job.

--Elly.

Amazing job. i loved it. i think that you have a gift and you should use it to the best of your ability ; keep up the good work. 5/5[:

Aww this was cutee
I would have liked if you would have stepped outside the box a bit
but it was still a good poem
nice job

Great poem. I really liked it. It had a very strong flow and i loved the word choice. 5/5

It`s totally you with some flowing mistakes, lol.

"You have given me so much,
I can't describe it here,
I hunger for your touch,
I want you with me here."
^^ It fit fine, but it just didn't sound right for some reason, it kind of took the. . . charm away. I think more because "hunger" isn't so, yeah. That you know? Lol, it still is fine there, it just through me off.

Other than that an amazing poem
You did a wonderful job with it, and I'm glad to see you're more Daniel-ish by the day. (:
Lol.

How can I describe,
All of these emotions,
And put into words,
The size of my devotion,

I don't think it is possible,
But at least I shall try,
You are my one and only,
In whom I will confide,

^^ Two stanzas I appreciated the most. With love in our lives, we are empowered beyond belief.. Love is the very essence and core of our being…Everyone in life has a deep-rooted desire to love and be loved. A cute and very romantic piece coming from a guy. Excellent piece. 5/5

This poem touched me from beginning to end. The flow here, although broken in some parts, was amazing. The choosing of words expressed such deep emotions... The rhymes were off in some places, like: here and here. Don't use the same words for rhyming. That's all I think, well done 5/5

It was a nice & sweet poems..

Man ull surely get what u want in this piece of writing its like the Ring to a wedding