My Life Abused

by You Kill Me   Mar 25, 2008


Bruised arm, scarred heart,

tears stream, tortured dreams,

here one day, gone the next,

afraid of him, afraid of her,

glass, screamed, tortured, blood, heart, cry, stabbed.

7 words never to be spoken in the same sentence... yet

they are........ They always are.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    Wow, I personally dont like this style of writing.... But these few words are home to so much emotion. Good work, thats a hard thing to do!

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    I thougth this was good...
    there was so much emotion in it...
    i could feel your pain.
    Great job!

    5/5

    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    This is pretty good but like who was the abuser in the poem...besides that lil detail i thought it was pretty good...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryce

    This was good but you should use different words to describe the feeling and mood

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice poem..i liked it...keep it up5/5..

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