My Personal Statement

by BluEyedMemory   Mar 29, 2008


I am Variety: Pick a topic
I hope I have a purpose maybe I'll find it
My personal statement is my dream
My love, my life all written in ash and flame
I am a writer always ready and wanting
I've seen stories unfold of illness and killing
Being me is anything but easy
Being unique and always trying to please
I'm not easily understood but I'm liberated
"Romance Never Last" Is my truth
Witnessing discrimination and war Anger my mind
Giving and Caring help me unwind
Be Great: My dream before death
Trying until nothing is left
I am my fate don't stop it
hopefully you wont mock it
Sports Writing is my dream: And I'll achieve it
I enjoy writing so please read it
I've never been perfect nor do I wont to be
I only have faith in me
I can change but I wont for you
Hopes and dreams wont run cold and blue
As you can see poetry is my thing
And everything else in life is a game
I have been through alot
My story is now all I've got
I cant tell you about my life: But I can tell you a story
A story of how I will rise to glory
I've been cold: Black runs through my veins
Some say being cold and dark is lame
But some push my buttons: No one should touch
Some people are just too much
I can handle things people shouldn't handle
These people trying to blow my dreams out like a candle
I want to Run. But where would I go
I cant leave my friends not to know
Nightmares are my reality
And people wonder why I'm cold
I've been easily dismissed
Now I hope he know What he's missed
I'm sorry he's blue
But not sorry about what he's done to me or you
Somehow my dreams are a jail
For everything that fails
Some never understand life
Until it happens to them
All Some see is sin
They cant learn how to forgive
I can only wish to show them how to live
I'm not afraid of life: I'm afraid of not living
and leaving this world unknowing.
But despite it all I'll move on in Color
Even if I wish I were another
I have this dream And I need to reach it
I'll never let go of my dream And I'll never regret it
Everything happens for a Reason: Things you've got to overcome
Never let you heart grow Numb.
This is my personal statement
A Variety: You pick a topic.

~~This poem pretty much got me into the college I wanted and the program... I'm really proud of it. I hope you enjoy it.
BluEyedMemory
Emma

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  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Few grammatical errors and it didn't really flow well.. but other than that this piece is great. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very very detailed, an enjoyable piece! I do think you should make it into stanzas that are five or six lines so it would not be one long poem. I felt like you were so true in writing and this came deep from your heart. This was my favorite line:

    "I can handle things people shouldn't handle
    These people trying to blow my dreams out like a candle"

    Very strong and powerful words throughout this whole poem, great job, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its realy beautiful,nicely flow and powerfull words:I've never been perfect nor do I wont to be
    I only have faith in me
    its true what you say and i give me hope
    and never let our dreams go,its so sweet and i love it alot 5/5 well done

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Woowwwww. This was really, really good. I can easily see why it got you into the college you wanted, anyone would be able to appreciate such an amazing poem as this.
    It was just so vivid, and it kept you hooked until the very last line. I think it could use some punctuation, but it is definitely gorgeous just the way it is.
    I would give you higher than 5/5 but I can't.
    ~gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    <3
    Beautiful! Nice how you write about your passion for writing.. =] "Hopes and dreams wont run cold and blue" < I loved that line! ^^
    Thanks for your comment.
    5/5
    x

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