The man with no face

by Dark Secrets   Apr 4, 2008


In my dreams you always appear
Same time, same place you're always here
Cuddling and holding me, whipping my tears

Looking meaningfully at my eyes
Kissing passionately it's no surprise
That with you time easily flies

Our feelings are much more than everyone thinks
They're not only glances and silly little winks
It's love we say, and everyone just blinks

You're the only one who gets my personality
You're the one who figures my speciality
Although, unfortunately you're no reality

We fight for our love, every night every day
As our love blooms more rapidly than I could say
Giving me motive to live each and every day

One thing about the relationship I embrace
Keeps me curious about your case
It's that you're a man who has no face

To Cinderella's prince her name was unknown
To me your face will remain unshown
But I will always wait for you, we won't be alone

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  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The rhyming seemed slightly forced on each line at the end of the stanza's, but overall it flowed really well, and I liked the imagery you portrayedn with the descriptions and words, a really lovely poem with a hint of sadness and longing.

    Love
    Tara
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    More than fantastic, i like it, you don't show me these emotions at school zahra?!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Really cool poem! I loved how you made it all rhyme. Please check out some of my poems if you can. Take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Zahra,

    Your man sounds really comforting to me!
    Very creative love poem by you!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid