Batteries Not Included

by WrittenInTheStars   Apr 12, 2008


Serenity is sold
in small plastic bottles.
Emotion is observed,
rationalized, diagnosed.
Life is manufactured,
artifical perfection,
batteries not included.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Different.. but in a good way. it short and sorta spunky in it's own way. i like it. keep it up. ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    I like this one too...man your a hecka good writter

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This free verse has a great flow delivering a very deep truth

  • 15 years ago

    by Cale

    I like it! Could have been a little longer but still really good!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    It took me a few re-readings of this poem to finally get at what you were trying to get across but that's just me. I'm slow so don't be offended. Anywho, such a short poem with such basic, common words yet it was indescribable. A well deserved 5/5!
    ~Stefanie

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