I surrender my soul

by xKeepxHoldingxOnxAndxNeverxLetxGox   Apr 16, 2008


I surrender my Soul
Wish I had chosen darkness from Cold
I drown in your ocean of Love

I surrender my Soul
So I can run far far Away
Find comfort in Pain

I surrender my Soul
More than words can Say
It’s just tears and Rain

I surrender my Soul
No heart to wrap Around
Underneath these stars Above

I surrender my Soul
Let my pride fall like Rain
I don’t miss the Pain

I surrender my Soul
Letting go of my Pride
The vague apprehension turns to sharp, clear Fear

I surrender my Soul
As I walk through the Doors
I find love is a poisonous Gas

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I like it.
    Its really good
    5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    :3
    oh wow. i absolutely loved this; i know the other person that commented this said something about the last part but these lines:
    I surrender my Soul
    As I walk through the Doors
    I find love is a poisonous Gas

    jeez. I love that last line. Really, it could be intoxicating right? i think this really shows some emotion. great job.
    5/5.

    =] i enjoyed it very much<33

    --**skye~

  • 17 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I really like it. from beginning to end. but this is my favorite part

    I surrender my Soul
    As I walk through the Doors
    I find love is a poisonous Gas

    cause it has a lot of meaning. that love made u dye inside slowly n slowly n yeah. i really like. nicely done!!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

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