Comments : You look but do you truly see?

  • 12 years ago

    by IchixXxCrushing

    Wow that was amazing. the flow of it and the words you choose. . . You wrote this with your heart, i can tell good job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Day Lee

    Aww it's sad..
    n i love it..
    so like OMG..
    yuh knoe wat i mean.. =]

  • 12 years ago

    by maEve may

    ..ouch!..just like what others have said, its sad..but anyway, i liked this poem, or so i say..i "love" it..5/5:)

  • 12 years ago

    by DeadFashionista

    Wowie. those are some horrible situations.really made me think about it.
    good job (:

  • 12 years ago

    by hisbluedaisy

    Oh hunny this poem is absolutly amazing . your really good !but i really like this poem because its has a true meaning and for sure it fantastic...5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by XxCoNfUsDxXbRoKeNxXlOnElYxX

    This poem is so true. Peopls just need to donate money to people that you kno for a fact could use it. Great Poem.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by I Heart Question Mark

    I really like this poem. And what you say is true. Its time for people to stop being so judegemental. Take soem time and get to know them, then you can think whatever. Dont judge before you get to know them. You could be that one person that helps me throught their situation. You never know. Great poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This is a great poem.5/5
    **harlea

  • 12 years ago

    by BreakEven

    Great job making a point. so true and people need to realize that too. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Excellent sentiments, for which I applaud you! But there are a couple of parts of the rhyme scheme and the rhythm that I found a little jarring. But don't take this as any kind of negative to what you've achieved here, as amongst the morass of "my life sux" and "im so sad" poems, this is a guiding light that the emo crowd should read and be ashamed of themselves because of.

  • 12 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Aww wow that was good...:)Definitely pulled on the heartstrings,and you really did good on getting the point across

  • 12 years ago

    by MyMuse

    THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL BUT SO SAD!!!! It brought tears to my eyes! Every Stanza was even better then the last! If you were right in front of me right now i would so give you a round of applase and i would be crying too lol...thank you for sharing such a inspiring poem! if people dont see what this is trying to say, they are clueless!!!

    Amazing!!!

    CourtneyxHolland
    xx
    5/5!!

  • 12 years ago

    by sarah cowell

    Wow thats pretty powerful stuff there i think you might get some where with that. it opens eyes and make you think.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sammerz

    That was amazingly very good actually im speechless alot of emotions it was sad but a great work of art....
    5/5
    Fantastic Job!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow thats so sad, but i love it
    there were so many emotions
    i can tell you put your heart into this
    keep it up girl!

  • 12 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    This is very moving, but i have to admit i change the channel when those commercial come on b/c i don't exactly have enough money to help those children, when i'm older and make a salary i definately help atleast one, but that's the thing, there are always more, it doesn't seem fair to only help one, anyway, this is amazing and will hopefully open people's eyes, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    This poem flows so well together, it was beautiful but yet so sad. this is very inspirational!!

    very nice job

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    I like thz one u r very talented.. .:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is really good but really sad... Mainly because it really does happen.. So many people walk away when they can easily help even jut 50 cents could make a huge dfference with someone and everyones to greedy to share a little... great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Wow, this is so amazing I don't even know what to say.

    5/5

    Fantastic job!!!