I really like this poem. And what you say is true. Its time for people to stop being so judegemental. Take soem time and get to know them, then you can think whatever. Dont judge before you get to know them. You could be that one person that helps me throught their situation. You never know. Great poem.
Excellent sentiments, for which I applaud you! But there are a couple of parts of the rhyme scheme and the rhythm that I found a little jarring. But don't take this as any kind of negative to what you've achieved here, as amongst the morass of "my life sux" and "im so sad" poems, this is a guiding light that the emo crowd should read and be ashamed of themselves because of.
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL BUT SO SAD!!!! It brought tears to my eyes! Every Stanza was even better then the last! If you were right in front of me right now i would so give you a round of applase and i would be crying too lol...thank you for sharing such a inspiring poem! if people dont see what this is trying to say, they are clueless!!!
This is very moving, but i have to admit i change the channel when those commercial come on b/c i don't exactly have enough money to help those children, when i'm older and make a salary i definately help atleast one, but that's the thing, there are always more, it doesn't seem fair to only help one, anyway, this is amazing and will hopefully open people's eyes, 5/5
This is really good but really sad... Mainly because it really does happen.. So many people walk away when they can easily help even jut 50 cents could make a huge dfference with someone and everyones to greedy to share a little... great job